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BEATS TO STEAL:
- Give the main characters a HUGE THING to be going through like Mike and Scarlet and their relationship. - Give the people in his family problems he needs to get involved in to help solve. Maggie and the douche boyfriend. Alex and making the team. Scarlet and her need to get on with her life. - doesn’t know how to dress - doesn’t know the woke politics and political correctness - Important that Mike is active even when he’s in the young body. he’s getting involved in his kid’s lives. he’s trying out fo the team. He’s trying to learn about them. He’s deciding to throw a party for his son. It’s not like any time he says “Here is my plan I will do now.” He just does it, and that’s so much better/ NOTE: The way they write about a whole basketball game is awesome and simple. Mike and Alex school Stan and Jazz. Steals, picks, fancy passes and scoring. The Coach watches with awe. A final 3 pointer by Mike in Stan's face seals the deal. More after read more break... |
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