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INT. KATE’S DUPLEX AND BEN’S APT – AY Kate has it together. Ben is a slob. INT. KATE’S DUPLEX – MORNING Kate and her daughter Maddie are cute. They both have some control issues though. COLD OPEN OUT Ben surprises them in the living room and Kate stabs him with an EpiPen. ACT ONE: p.3-13 INT. KATE’S DUPLEX – DAY Ben and BJ and Maddie stage an intervention. Kate needs to go on a date. INT. TOMMY’S PERV-MOBILE - DAY Kate complains about ben. INT. KATE’S MOMMY MOBILE – DAY Ben learns that his dream girl got engaged. INT. TOWNY BAR – DAY Kate is still complaining about Ben. EXT. MINI-MALL – DAY Ben continues his convo w/ Tommy re: the dream girl. Then he enterst the store with Maddie and explains that her mom, Kate, needs help INT. HAIR SALON – DAY With the help of the hair guy, Kate realizes that she might need help. INT. STORE – DAY Ben and Maddie bond. INT. HAIR SALON – DAY Kate checks the nanny cam at her house. ON THE NANNY CAM Ben and Tommy and Maddie are getting rowdy, planning for a wedding. ACT OUT Kate rushes out of the salon, freaked out by what Ben’s up to. ACT TWO: p.13-19 INT. KATE’S DUPLEX – DAY Kate is mad. Then she learns about Darcy and vows to help Ben out. INT. COUNTRY CLUB BALLROOM – NIGHT Kate, Tommy and Ben rehearse for when he’s gonna interrupt the wedding the next day. INT. KATE’S DUPLEX – THE NEXT DAY Kate gets ready for her date. Ben is very encouraging - - a good brother. ACT OUT The Baby sitter quits. What does that mean for the date though? ACT THREE: p.19-32 EXT. KATE’S DUPLEX – EVENING Kate and Ben talk about how he needs to grow up, then she leaves for her date, promising to be back by five so he can crash his wedding. INT. TOWNY BAR – EVENING BJ preps Kate for her date. INT. KATE’S DUPLEX – SAME TIME Ben and Maddie head out for the wedding, equipped with the baby monitor so they can check in on Kate’s date. INT. TOWNY BAR – EVENING Kate talks about Maddie at the date. INT. KATE’S MOMMY-MOBILE – EVENING Ben and Maddie tune in to listen to Kate on her date. BACK IN THE TOWNY BAR The date continues. INTERCUT MOMMY MOBILE AN TOWNY BAR Kate really messes up the date, admitting her mom-ness. Ben listens, beside himself. Ben decides to change course and go save Kate. IN THE TOWNY BAR Ben kicks the date out, even though he was about to bail on Kate anyways. Katei s appreciative, and says “Let’s go crash that wedding.” INT. COUNTRY CLUB- NIGHT Kate gives a speech on Ben’s behalf. But it’s too late. The girl already got hitched. LATER Kate gets upset, surrounded by love. Ben pulls her under the table and they talk. ACT OUT All is resolved, plus Ben offers to stay on as the nanny and Kate accepts. GENERAL: BEN * Remember that Ryan guy from High * School? POP TO the back of someone’s head. Luxurious, bouncing hair. * REVEAL it’s a hot guy, RYAN. YOUNG KATE (frizzy hair, * braces) stands at her locker. He passes, oblivious, as Kate * takes his picture-- YOUNG KATE * For yearbook? Kate opens her locker. There are a bunch of weird photos of * Ryan inside. BACK TO SCENE. MADDIE * That spells Kate. Mommy’s my best * friend. We have matching pajamas * and I’m not allowed to eat wheat.
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9/10/2019 12:42:36 am
This is one of the best screenplays that I have watched in a long time. I do not really have a lot of time off of work, so I never really got the chance to watch any at all last year. I am really glad that I decided to watch this screenplay of yours. I was intrigued by the premise of the story, so I immediately bought myself a seat. I enjoyed every single detail that you included in your screenplay.
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