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[dictated each chapter summary. did not proofread summaries. proceed with caution.  I love myself!]

Odd and interesting early aughts pilot by Charlie Kaufman. Did not get produced but was great to read.

Outline and thoughts on next page.

Millionth reading of this great pilot. Made a new draft of an outline for it. Also included lots of updated thoughts. If I do a TV Pilot Podcast, this will be episode one.

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BEATS TO STEAL:
- Give the main characters a HUGE THING to be going through like Mike and Scarlet and their relationship.
- Give the people in his family problems he needs to get involved in to help solve. Maggie and the douche boyfriend. Alex and making the team. Scarlet and her need to get on with her life.
- doesn’t know how to dress
- doesn’t know the woke politics and political correctness
- Important that Mike is active even when he’s in the young body. he’s getting involved in his kid’s lives. he’s trying out fo the team. He’s trying to learn about them. He’s deciding to throw a party for his son. It’s not like any time he says “Here is my plan I will do now.” He just does it, and that’s so much better/


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The way they write about a whole basketball game is awesome and simple.

Mike and Alex school Stan and Jazz. Steals, picks, fancy passes and scoring. The Coach watches with awe. A final 3 pointer by Mike in Stan's face seals the deal.

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