Lessons and outline on next page... LESSONS Like that they were locked inside. Like that the people in the house had motive to kill one another and did not trust each other. Liked that one of them was familiar with the house Liked that one of them EXPECTED that haunt but then realized more was happening= Liked the use of the old psychiatric ward creepy shit basically like the torture chambers and stuff Cool way to USE the unique space and identity of the house… HOUSE ON HAUNTED HILL BY DICK BEEBE [outline] SEQUENCE 1 1931 Psych hospital Crazed patients kill everyone, including doctor vannacut News reel footage tells us Vanacutt was conducting horrid experiments on patients Later footage tells us the hospital was damaged in a fire but later outfitted into a home We also learn five members of the hospital staff survived the massacre End sequence on EVELYN in a limo. She watched all that on the TV back there and it delighted her. SEQUENCE 2 Meet tycoon PRICE at amusement park Delights in scaring people with his coasters and pranks Sets up dummies to make guests think coasters are derailing etc. Sequence ends with Price/Evelyn phone call. She says she wants to have her birthday party at the place from the videos… The House on Haunted Hill. SEQUENCE 3 Price sends guest list for party. CPU oddly deletes guest list and replaces with others We meet SARA, the assistant of someone for whom the invitation was meant Sara gets fired, steals the invite and pretends to be the boss Procession of Hearses Leads each of five invitees up to the house as they review the invites “Survive the night and win $1M.” SEQUENCE 4 Five guests arrive at house. EDDIE MELLISA SARA BLACKBURN They are greeted by Pritchett. Not clear if Pritchett is for real or not but claims he owns the house. House gets lit up and Marilyn Manson plays. Price and wife Evelyn welcome them. A skylight shatters and almost kills them. Evelyn is pissed b/c these are NOT her guests she wanted invited. We learn Price has a guy hiding in a control room that rigged the whole place like a haunted house Price and Evelyn argue. Who are these guests? They both blame each other. LATER Price explains. 1M to anyone who survives the night. If someone dies or leaves their money gets split with the survivors. Note: Driver PRITCHETT has just been trying to get paid for house rental and leave this whole time But then the house locks down with the old asylum iron gates to keep patients locked inside. Pritchett tries to escape. Gets wounded. Tells everyone the house will get them. Sara says she’s going to find the switch in the basement to open the gates. Evelyn reveals the coffin is filled with guns. Sara takes one. Price talks to Schecter the Control Room Guy… Schecter reveals he did NOT lower the gates. Price assumes it was shit wife EVELYN who is fucking with him… BASEMENT Sara, Price and caretaker Pritchett look for the switch Pritchett convinced they will all die Reveals that his dad died in a creepy locked room Find electro shock room.. Find saturation chamber room… Sarah tries to get the lights working Meanwhile Pritchett finds the switch for the gates Sara tells Eddie who she really is and tells the story of how she stole her bosses invitation Turns back and Eddie is missing LEVER to lift gates has snapped off… Meanwhile Sara hunts for Eddie… Sees him in a vat of blood and reaches in for him. But then he shows up behind her, no blood at all. WTF. SEQUENCE 5 Pritchett says “the house has marked the two of you” to Eddie and Sara… Pritchett says they’re fucked They decide to stick together Except MELISSA is already off hunting the poltergeist with her camera… HALLWAY Basement. Mel finds images of torture in blood in the wall. The images come to life. She finds chamber where the doctor died in the intro… Lowers camera and he’s gone. Turns around and is attacked by a crazed patient. They find her camera but not her body. UPSTAIRS Review Mel’s footage. Chaos. Everyone revolts against Price. Grabs a gun and looks for an exit. NEXT SEQUENCE Price consults with Schecter the Control Room Guy. WTF is happening here? Grabs Schecter. Woops. His face is gone. He left a note that someone else was in the house… HALLWAY Sara and Eddit try to break out Lights go wild Everyone runs. Pritchett starts to babble… Downstairs They find Evenlyn getting electro shock She’s dead ARGUMENT They turn on each other No one trusts price They decide to detain him in the saturdation chamber SATURATION CHAMBER Price is left there to be tormented by light, sound etc. NEW SEQUENCE BASEMENT Sara and Eddie are lost but find the others BIG REALIZATION They are all relatives of the five who survived the house back in the day except for BLACKBURN BASEMENT Blackburn with Evelyn. They are lovers. She was not dead. This is all a plan to kill Price and get his money. Evelyn kills Blackburn. UPSTAIRS They go looking for blackburn find him dead decide price did it HOUSE Eddie and Sara hunt for Price Find him. Price tries to explain that Evelyn and Blackburn are villains Sara kills Price with the gun. EVELYN goes to Price body to gloat He comes back to life Faked it Caught her cheating this was all to catch her and murder her without any guilt and with no one knowing since they all already saw her die EVELYN V. PRICE Except there’s another presence in the room. Price says they released the evil. Price battles an evil being. Loses and gets sucked below. Eddie, Sara and Pritchett remain A window opens partially House twists and grows and freaks them out House detonates and weaponizes itself Sara sinks into the floor etc. Floor falls away to reveal THE EVIL DOCTOR’S VICTIM’S REMAINS Pritchett heads to attic to find a way to open the windows maybe a pulley or something He finds it Doesn’t work but he throws a fit and it opens a window three feet wide up in the attic BASEMENT Eddie saves Sara from the dead Pritchett about to leave then he shouts down to them that he found the way out One last battle with evil then… THEY’RE OUTSIDE CUT TO TV SHOW HOST DESCRIBING THE EVENTS Everything returned to normal in house No sign of what happened No sign of Evelyn or Price Pritchett is not surprised Says they are part of the house now. 1930S FOOTAGE Same as intro But the crazed doctors have the faces of Evelyn and Price Pritchett VO says “It won’t stop until it’s got every one—“ THE END
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4/23/2020 09:28:25 pm
Children should be encouraged to be independent. Well, there are a lot of things that we need to be responsible for them, but there are stuff that they need to be responsible for too. If you keep babying your child, then he will never grow up. If you are a parent, then you must consider the things that you are doing to your child. In my opinion, we should try to empower them and allow them to make choices for themselves
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