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New Girl - Pilot Outline

1/29/2017

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Good modern ensemble. Look back on this for balancing stories, introducing characters, having friends be good to each other without being cheesy.

Written by Liz Meriwhether
​COLD OPEN (1-4)
  • Jess break up. Reveal that she’s in the middle of an interview for an apt.
 
ACT ONE (4-36 - - - I guess this was written as a cable show)
  • Jess finishes the interview.
  • QUICK SHOT of Jess moving in
  • DAYS LATER She’s crying ath te table.
  • ANOTHER DAY and she’s watching pretty woman and the guys are not happy with it
  • ANOTHER NIGHT one of the guys’ date joins jess to watch pretty woman.
  • ANOTHER TIME guys finally get sick of it and say they’re gonna take her out.
  • JESS on phone with freidn. Clear that she’s popular in school. Talking to cece about how the guys are gonna help her find guys.
  • Schmidt finds out about Vic Secret party. Calls Nick. Nick has to call his ex to get them in.
  • COACH learns he has to talk to his spin class students more womanly
  • AT HOME coach asks jess for help talking to women. Schmidt gets Jess to go out, launches us into the bar scene
  • AT THE BAR Nick is bartender. Next beat in Vic Secret party story. Nick says they’re gonna go, basicalliy cuz he feels insecure about being a bar tender.
  • LATER: Coach is still freaking out about wearing Jess’ jeggings.
  • AT THE BAR: Nick and Jess discuss should they hook up. Nick reveals he got dumped too. They have the beginnings of a will won’t.
  •  Jess approaches a new guy and weirds it up.
  • AT THE BAR: Jess reveals she actually got a date for tomorrow by telling the guy she needs rebound sex.
  • Nick with ex. Gets her to get them into the Vic Sec party.
  • AT GYM: Coach feels uncomfortable with trying to talk to women at work.
  • AT HOME: Gang gets Jess ready for date. Nick is encouraging.
  • AT VIC SEC PARTY: The guys realize that Jess got stood up cuz her date shows up at the party. They bolt down street to go find her.
  • Guys show up at the restaurant where Jess has been stood up and do a “favorite things” mash up and get kicked out.
  • ACT OUT: Guys watch Pretty Woman together.
 
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